Feedback on my First Deck Appreciated!
CandyFlipper 2 months{"ops":[{"attributes":{"link":"https://archidekt.com/decks/13244815/first_build"},"insert":"My Build"},{"insert":"\n\nNewish, player here, have been playing casually and mostly collecting. I sat down one night after pulling a "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Vorinclex, Monstrous Raider"}},{"insert":" and decided I wanted to try making a deck around it as my commander. Pulled from everything I had laying around, which was limited at the time. After i was done i realized that the blue/green theme i had chosen needed to fit my commanders color identity, so i quickly found a commander who could fit the bill (only dude i had available). So that is subject to change, like everything else here. \n\nAlso the Lands. I really would like to add more dual color lands and more unique ones but, again, i worked with what i had. Now im ready to upgrade and im wondering what i should look for to improve. Played with it once and lost mainly because of mana and a sloppy early game. Was fun though! Thanks in advance!\n"}]}
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darkconfidnt 2 months{"ops":[{"insert":"It looks like the primary win-con is either proliferate opponents' poison counters, and/or +1/+1 counter synergies and bashing in combat. To that end, I'd suggest removing cards that don't satisfy either objective: "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Teething Wurmlet"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Mercurial Spelldancer"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Skyscythe Engulfer"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Maze's Mantle"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Take Flight"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Might of Murasa"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Shoot Down"}},{"insert":" \nAnd looking for other cards that fit more directly with your game plan. Good luck!\n"}]}
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John_Sherwood 2 months{"ops":[{"insert":"Lands that enter tapped need more upside than fixing your colors. Lands like Uncharted Haven are objectively worse than basics. Terramorphic Expanse and Evolving Wilds are ok in budget decks with 3 or more colors, but budget 2 color decks almost never need them. Gain lands like Thornwood Falls are ok if you have lifegain triggers, otherwise they're just hurting your tempo. \nYou aren't running enough lands. I would cut Murcurial Spelldancer and Contagious Vorrac, then add a couple more lands. \n"}]}
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CandyFlipper 2 months{"ops":[{"insert":"Makes sense! Thanks for taking the time to look it over.\n"}]}
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