My first deck needs help

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shraga avatarshraga 40 days
{"ops":[{"insert":"Hello everyone. I am rather new to mtg i know the rules, played a few games and know most of the important interactions. This deck is my first ever created and i need the opinion of some experts (you). Please give me some feedback and help me improve my deck.\n\nThank you :)\n\nhttps://archidekt.com/decks/14414793/iron_woman?sort=alpha&stack=custom\n"}]}
Edited 7/10/2025, 1:35:44 PM
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darkconfidnt avatardarkconfidnt 40 days
{"ops":[{"insert":"welcome! this looks quite solid already, even balancing out draw, ramp, and interaction - nice job :)\n\nI don't think "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Brash Taunter"}},{"insert":" fits with the game plan (I get the idea of suiting it up and fighting, but that seems too slow for me). \nI'd also cut another 1-3 cards from your 'protection' category - I least like "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Whispersilk Cloak"}},{"insert":", "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Darksteel Plate"}},{"insert":", and "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Resistance Reunited"}},{"insert":" - given that "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Akiri, Fearless Voyager"}},{"insert":" offers protection already. \nYou only have 6 cards that produce colorless mana to cast "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Null Elemental Blast"}},{"insert":" (it "},{"attributes":{"italic":true},"insert":"can't"},{"insert":" be cast with Red or White mana) -> so I'd cut it for something else.\n"},{"insert":{"card-link":"Explorer's Scope"}},{"insert":" will hit a land ~1/3 of the time -> that feels underwhelming to me (esp w/o any landfall payoffs) so I'd cut it\n\nIn addition to your slew of choices in your maybeboard, I'll also suggest "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Beamtown Beatstick"}},{"insert":", "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Take the Bait"}},{"insert":" or "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Mandate of Peace"}},{"insert":" (both great in a "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Sunforger"}},{"insert":" package!), and "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Zephyr Boots"}},{"insert":". have fun!\n"}]}
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shraga avatarshraga 40 days
{"ops":[{"insert":"thank you!\n"}]}
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elmo0823 avatarelmo0823 38 days
{"ops":[{"insert":"Welcome,\n\nI am not a fan of "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Rebuff the Wicked"}},{"insert":" as it only counters targeted spells and your commander already protects with indestructible. I like "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Clever Concealment"}},{"insert":" t, "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Flare of Fortitude"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Robe of Stars"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Teferi's Protection"}},{"insert":" \n\n"},{"insert":{"card-link":"Bloodforged Battle-Axe"}},{"insert":" can get expensive with equips without a free equip also "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Bonesplitter"}},{"insert":" is an average equipment. So I prefer a bigger buff like "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Lizard Blades"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Basilisk Collar"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Embercleave"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Excalibur, Sword of Eden"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Duelist's Heritage"}},{"insert":" \n\nAnother great white card in attack decks is "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Reconnaissance"}},{"insert":" . Get to know this card as you can remove your creatures from attacking after getting the triggers and/or if they are unfavorable blocked but it is also like vigilance as you can untap your creatures after they do damage.\n\nSome of the best board wipes are in white some of my favorites are "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Tragic Arrogance"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Promise of Loyalty"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Vanquish the Horde"}},{"insert":" \n\nYou are also in white which to some is the second best land ramp. You play what is called catchup ramp. These cards include "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Archaeomancer's Map"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Surveyor's Scope"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Sand Scout"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Loyal Warhound"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Knight of the White Orchid"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Keeper of the Accord"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Deep Gnome Terramancer"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Claim Jumper"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Arid Archway"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Boros Garrison"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Guildless Commons"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Lotus Field"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Land Tax"}},{"insert":" \n\nSome of the cards in the maybeboard that I really like are "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Vandalblast"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Tibalt's Trickery"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Sundown Pass"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Sejiri Shelter // Sejiri Glacier"}},{"insert":" (I love mdfc's)"},{"insert":{"card-link":"Relic of Legends"}},{"insert":" (if you have over 15 or 20 legends) "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Inventory Management"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Elegant Parlor"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Deflecting Swat"}},{"insert":" \n"}]}
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shraga avatarshraga 38 days
{"ops":[{"insert":"Thanks a lot :)\n"}]}
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