MY FIRST COMMANDER :)

{"ops":[{"insert":"I agree with darkconfidnt, Elas il-Kor or Zoraline would be better commanders for your strategy. Most of their other card recs are good too. \n\nYour deck does not have enough lands. There's a lot of online debate around this issue, but the simple truth is play more lands = play more "},{"attributes":{"italic":true},"insert":"Magic"},{"insert":". 36 lands is in frequent mulligan territory, and with your mana curve, you will regularly miss land drops and get mana screwed. In a deck with average MV above 3, I wouldn't go lower than 38. People better than me at math would tell you 42 is the ideal land count.\n\nYour mana base is also slowing your tempo. 1- and 2-color lands that enter tapped are almost always worse than a basic. Cut Crossroads Village, Mirage Mesa and Orzhov Guildgate. Kabira Crossroads and Scoured Barrens are probably ok because your deck has life gain triggers, but you don't have any synergy with Forlorn Flats.\n\n If you want Valkyrie's call to be your top end, then I recommend playing less angels. Over a third of the creatures currently in your deck won't trigger Valkyrie's Call. It's a 5-drop; that much mana investment deserves more payoff.\n"}]}

{"ops":[{"insert":"Congrats on building your first deck! \n\nIf I understand your intent correctly, you want to: \na) repeatedly trigger life gain and life drain effects based on creatures entering or dying \nb) leverage recursion (or blink) effects to keep a board presence even in the face of removal\n\n"},{"insert":{"card-link":"Neva, Stalked by Nightmares"}},{"insert":" seems slow (and I only count 2 enchantments in your list) - perhaps "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Elas il-Kor, Sadistic Pilgrim"}},{"insert":" would be a better fit? Or even "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Zoraline, Cosmos Caller"}},{"insert":"?\nRe: a) I'd suggest a higher incidence of repeatable life-gain effects ("},{"insert":{"card-link":"Soul Warden"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Soul's Attendant"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Lunarch Veteran // Luminous Phantom"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Suture Priest"}},{"insert":" etc) or drain effects (black has several: "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Vraan, Executioner Thane"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Blood Artist"}},{"insert":" etc) and more life-gain payoffs ("},{"insert":{"card-link":"Minwu, White Mage"}},{"insert":" etc)\n\nRe: b) large-scale recursion like "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Cauldron Haze"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Cauldron of Souls"}},{"insert":" will rebuy all dies and enters triggers (or single-target protection like "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Feign Death"}},{"insert":" / "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Undying Malice"}},{"insert":"). \n\nAdd'l ideas: "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Orah, Skyclave Hierophant"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Attended Healer"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Inspiring Overseer"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Kor Celebrant"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Priest of Ancient Lore"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Morbid Opportunist"}},{"insert":" \n\nI personally would cut "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Infernal Idol"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Starnheim Memento"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Ring of the Lucii"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Draugr Recruiter"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Cleaving Reaper"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Scion of the Swarm"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Venerated Loxodon"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Heavenly Blademaster"}},{"insert":" (I count 4 equipment) "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Light of the Legion"}},{"insert":" "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Bleed Dry"}},{"insert":" \n"}]}