{"ops":[{"insert":"Hey Guys, check out this deck I have, I kinda need help making sure it'll work with multiplayer before I commit to it. Could use some help.\n"},{"attributes":{"link":"https://archidekt.com/decks/242817#Your_Turn_Is_My_Turn"},"insert":"https://archidekt.com/decks/242817#Your_Turn_Is_My_Turn"},{"insert":"\nThanks\n"}]}
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{"ops":[{"attributes":{"background":"#000000","color":"#ffffff","bold":true},"insert":"YOUR TURNS"},{"attributes":{"header":1},"insert":"\n"},{"attributes":{"background":"#000000","color":"#ffffff","bold":true},"insert":"HAND 'EM OVER"},{"attributes":{"header":1},"insert":"\n"}]}
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{"ops":[{"insert":"Hi,\n\nMaybe you could use custom categories (and slot the cards in) to quickly explain, why you chose the respective card (this is helpful especially for people, who don't play / haven't seen your commander so far). Maybe you want to take a look at one of my decks, to get an idea, what I exactly mean: "},{"attributes":{"link":"https://archidekt.com/decks/155830#Your_mind_is_dust_-_Phenax,_God_of_Deception"},"insert":"https://archidekt.com/decks/155830#Your_mind_is_dust_-_Phenax,_God_of_Deception"},{"insert":".\nI see two obvious win conditions ("},{"insert":{"card-link":"Laboratory Maniac"}},{"insert":" and "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Aetherflux Reservoir"}},{"insert":"). Are there any other win cons I might have missed?\n\nMaybe you can describe, what you intent to do with the deck, e.g. how to play, at approx. which turn you want to win, maybe even how your meta is.\n\nAnd what I don't see is any kind of board wipe, so no "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Cyclonic Rift"}},{"insert":" and no "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Wrath of God"}},{"insert":". I would include at least one of them.\n\nEverything else looks fine for me.\n"}]}
Edited 10/21/2019, 8:50:01 AM
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{"ops":[{"insert":"Mostly, what it's trying to do is pretend to be a group hug deck until around turn 7 or so, when you start to become alarmed with either the massive number of cards you've drawn or alternatively, the amount I've drawn. But mostly , the main win conditon is milling myself out and winning that way.\n"}]}
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{"ops":[{"insert":"Coming back to your deck ;) Custom categories really explain a whole lot better, what every card is intending to do. \n\nDepending on your budget, you could consider some upgrades in your mana base (no, not the ABUR duals) by using shocklands ("},{"insert":{"card-link":"Hallowed Fountain"}},{"insert":", "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Watery Grave"}},{"insert":", "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Godless Shrine"}},{"insert":") and as an additional (or replacment) counterspell "},{"insert":{"card-link":"Swan Song"}},{"insert":".\n"}]}
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